Here is the final product of my Genius Hour research. It was an awesome experience actually getting to do my own Genius Hour project and I really enjoyed it. I researched about how to better support the physical and emotional needs of animals in captivity, particularly in zoo's. Within my Ted Talk I discuss the important information that I found. I hope you enjoy the video, I really enjoyed making it!
Dear Kaylene,
ReplyDeleteYour video is really touching and you make a lot of great points by backing them up with statistics. By expressing these stats, you really stress the importance of why it is bad to have animals in Zoo's. The stat regarding the baby cubs really stuck with me because I truly love Lions and would love to see them for as long as I live.
In regards to the making of your video I think you did a great job incorporating links, photos, and videos into your Ted Talk that really help the overall presentation. I think that the music could have been lowered a bit just to make sure your voice is the main source of sound throughout the video. I like the transitions you make from scene to scene it really allows the viewer to see your opinions on certain topics, well done.
I hope we can solve this issue going forward and if we can't, I hope we can make it better for these animals!
Have a wonderful break,
Mr. D
Hi Kaylene,
ReplyDeleteThis was a very interesting TedTalk! It was well done and you can tell that you learnt a lot about animals in captivity. I like how you used the music to play on the emotions of you audience but sometimes it was a little loud and hard to hear what you were saying.
Good use of ending credit to place your citations. I loved how you placed the stats and the website in the TedTalk I think it made the video that much better and gave a deeper understanding of animals in captivity.
Just be aware that sometimes your words are cut off by the transitions. But the transition were great and broke up the information very well to make it clear to your audience.
Great Job,
- Nadia
Hi Kaylene,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your TedTalk video. I remember watching your trailer and being really interested in the topic you were researching. I thought you did a good job at explaining why exactly you researched this topic, touching on a lot of important information for your viewers to know. I liked how you had the music in background it really added intensity to your video as you discussed this serious issue. Having the clips of animals was also really useful to show animals behaviours while they are in captivity. Great Job!
Rachel